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~He showed me the love I was neglected~ (A step brother/sister romance)

~He showed me the love I was neglected~ (A step brother/sister romance)

285K Reads 5.4K Votes 19 Part Story
Aspen By Its_Just_Me_Aspen Completed

****Used to be called My so called Step Brother****
16 year old Bay Anderson has had to deal with mental and physical abuse her whole life, but she never does anything to stop it. She lives alone with her mom Alice after her dad died in a car crash that she survived.  Her mom soon starts to date a guy named Brian Johansan and it seems that his son Adam is the jock of the school. She has hated Adam since the first day she met him. What happens when her mom and Brian decide to move in with each other. What will happen between Bay and Adam? Will they take the risk of being more than just step-siblings?

Aly_Gee_ Aly_Gee_ Apr 26
I love the story, but maybe you should have someone spell check and such
Aly_Gee_ Aly_Gee_ Apr 26
While I would love the plot and such, you should add more depth instead of just jumping into things such as her cutting herself.  Honestly, the story itself jumped everywhere.
Hours damn i would be complaining about my butt hurting the whole time
poohbearnene poohbearnene Jun 20, 2016
i wouldve duck crawled through his legs locked myself in my room leave through the window and go eat tons of food! ( im not fat, promsie😂 i just really love food )
Dorsey18 Dorsey18 May 27, 2016
Just like mine but 10 times nicer lmao seriously tho she's nice compared to mine
Teenytineywiney Teenytineywiney Sep 22, 2016
I don't want to sound rude but a couple words are misspelled so if you want me to proofread your work just let me know.I like what you have going here it looks like a great story.