Unfit to be a mother

Unfit to be a mother

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Hannah C. By HannahOfTheInternet Completed

Jenna Marks had it all--the reputation, the stupid best friend and the hot ex-boyfriend. Two and a half months after breaking up with said boyfriend, she finds out she's pregnant. She feels utterly alone in the world and pregnant with no support. She doesn't even know if she should keep it.

Dylan, her ex, is avoiding her at all cost. His on-again-off-again girlfriend, Eileen, is torturing her as best she can. And her 'best friend' is ignoring her. When you factor in, Jenna's sarcastic brother, angry step-father, and usually absent mother, her life is pretty freaking fantastic. 

A few parties, a beach trip, and an argument later, she doesn't know what to do anymore. 

Jenna tries to hold on to herself, but she finds it getting harder and harder the bigger she gets. Jenna's story isn't just a pregnancy story.

  • dylan
  • family
  • father
  • fey
  • jenna
  • love
  • mom
  • mother
  • pregnancy
  • story
  • teen
  • unfit
Bubble12 Bubble12 Jul 16, 2013
@PrincessofObsidian It's fine I tend to overreact a bit if you hadn't noticed haha
HannahOfTheInternet HannahOfTheInternet Jul 16, 2013
@Bubble12 I guess O.o This is my first (original fic) story and it still needs badly edited, so I guess the wording could be pretty bad.
Bubble12 Bubble12 Jul 16, 2013
@PrincessofObsidian I wish you wrote this comment first because I misunderstood and was like "why the hell is she driving?!?" there is two ways to perceive what happened from the text
Bubble12 Bubble12 Jul 16, 2013
@PrincessofObsidian Okay now you're just reaching win the not every car has buttons and now they're driving a stick?!? They had buttons to. Car keys with buttons were around for a loop oolong time Jesus!! And friends drive each others car all the time!! Like that is so hard to believe really?!?
HannahOfTheInternet HannahOfTheInternet Jul 16, 2013
@Bubble12 If you weren't stupid I wouldn't have to explain common sense and context clues.
Bubble12 Bubble12 Jul 16, 2013
You made it sound like Jenna was driving, "I held out my hands, silently asking for Chloe's care keys." Next time explain better and you won't look stupid it's simple.