Some of us just need to find our other halves. Others need to find ourselves.
That's how much time I have been playing soccer for! Wow we have something in common!
Omg the boots situation is always so annoying so embarrassing as well
Why would she need boots for the winter of it didn't get cold???
Ah, I loved how you ended the chapter!
"A dark chocolate curl."
It keeps you wanting to read more. I like that kinda thing.
This was really good! :) This doesn't have relevance to the story but I love the word "bittersweet" haha, I'm so happy you used that.