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Beneath the Fountain

Beneath the Fountain

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Gabs By Gabs604 Updated Jan 12

Sage is what her mother calls a dreamer:  she believes in magic,  true love, and happy endings. Unfortunately for Sage, her mother is determined to crush her dreams. 

Sage's father died suddenly six months prior to her 18th birthday. Her family struggling financially, her Mother surprises Sage with a ball to celebrate her birthday. But she also receives the unwanted present of a courtship to a very rich and vain man. Sage becomes upset because she thought she'd marry a man she loves. The problem is: she could never love a man as horrid as her betrothed. 

Just when Sage is about to give up all hope, a hidden world reveals itself to her. It offers her a temporary escape from the her life, and she meets a man who feels just as trapped as she is. As she learns more about him and his fate, she discovers that her life has always been full of secrets and magic, and in the end, she might just save herself.

The story description made it sound like a 12 dancing princesses retelling. I dont know if it is but I am indeed intrigued
I love this so much!!!!!!! This book is SO amazing, great job! I'm instantly drawn in!
angie_tf angie_tf Feb 16, 2016
I love the book already, the way she loves to look at the sunrise and the memories of her father and just the beginning almost made me cry
Oh my stars, this is SO AMAZING. I love how the description sounds, and I can't wait to read this entire thing! I do love it especially because my first name is Sage, too!!!! This is so amazing, you should publish it.
Emma_of_Woodhouse Emma_of_Woodhouse Oct 11, 2015
I love  the way you described the clothes and wonder how she will escape the wedding.
DeejMiranda DeejMiranda Sep 21, 2015
This scene might be a little long for an opening chapter. Maybe just tighten it up in a few places, and you should split some of the longer paragraphs. Sometimes the narrative can get bogged down in big walls of text. Other than that, I thought it was a great chapter! :)