Hunter's Chance

Hunter's Chance

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deesmith004 By deesmith004 Updated Mar 15

Raegan Hunter is complicated. 

She has layers. She's terrified of uncertainty and change and she's made a habit in avoiding those who push her boundaries. No one bothers asking questions and that's how she likes it. That is, until James comes along. Somehow she can see past his annoying tendencies in showing up at all the right times and saying all the right things, but what sends her average life into a world of change is that he wants to get to know her. The real her.  And though she's fighting it, he's so easily beginning to barrel through every wall that she's ever built. Will she push him out like the others or could this be her chance to change?

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Debismita Debismita Apr 25, 2016
Oh god. I went to vote for it and saw I had already voted for this chapter... when? lol I don't even remember. I am loving this so far. Great imagery, girl!
WhitneyHubble WhitneyHubble Dec 23, 2015
I'm already in love with this book Dani and I haven't even started the first actual chapter. I am no where near the writer you are so be prepared for an overwhelming amount of praise from me. I can't wait to read this in its entirety!
twin_cities twin_cities Aug 26, 2015
Wow, what a touching prologue. I love the way you capture the solemn mood and the intense emotions in this chapter so effectively, beautifully done!
wrightstory wrightstory Aug 22, 2015
 #NBR I just wanted to read the prologue...gives me a better feel.  And I really love it...smooth...dramatic.  Well done.
DawnStarling DawnStarling Jun 29, 2015
That last paragraph is gut wrenching. Ties it all together, I feel her loss, I feel for her. Beautiful prologue. Looking forward for more.
Hi_Its_Rose_ Hi_Its_Rose_ Jun 09, 2015
@LifeandLemons23  let me revise that I am not anywhere NEAR the writer @deesmith004 is!!!! But I'm sure your closer