Im pregnant by my mom boyfriend

Im pregnant by my mom boyfriend

81.6K Reads 1K Votes 6 Part Story
RacheLLy E. By Rachellyx Updated Aug 14, 2011

This young girl name Loreen is pregnant by her mom younger boyfriend. See where the journey goes..

usagold1 usagold1 Jun 05
I think you have a great idea with the story but you need to work on how to write your dialogue, punctuation , and proper English.
one0two one0two Apr 24, 2016
Maybe you should tone it down a bit and fix some stuff. But anyways it's still decent
Miako-san Miako-san Jun 04, 2016
very interesting keep going this will be a very interesting story
blueheelergrl blueheelergrl Apr 27, 2015
wow this story is really good, i will be uploading a few stories,plz check out
stephaloptapus stephaloptapus Feb 23, 2014
you really need to go to English class to learn some proper English. god damn. just some spelling and punctuation would do you good.
xxxMM31xx xxxMM31xx Apr 12, 2011
OMG, this story is soooooooooooo mysterious and really gd.
                              Btw can u read my story Just Tragic
                              i will really appreciate it if u vote, comment and fan
                              thx so much
                              keep writing