Tobias's sister

Tobias's sister

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Megan By blover99 Updated Jul 02

Rosemary Eaton thought that the hardest challenge she would ever have to face was living with her abusive father, Marcus Eaton. She thought that she could transfer to Dauntless like her older brother, Tobias, and then all her troubles would be over. How wrong she was. 

Join Rosemary in her journey through Dauntless; facing arguments, heartbreaks and secrets that need to be kept to the grave.


I like it. I started off writing Divergent Fanfics on Fanfiction.Net, and I can say this was much better than mine XD. Again with the length, just a little bit longer maybe? And a little more description. But really good so far overall.
Good start. Most fanfiction's aren't wellwritten, usually, but this is really descriptive. I just wish it was a little longer! :)
I thought it was going to be Tobias but they didn't recognise each other