16 Shades of Grey and a little Black

16 Shades of Grey and a little Black

26.5K Reads 159 Votes 2 Part Story
faceinthecrowd By faceinthecrowd Completed

The gunman feels betrayed by his country. He feels betrayed by his god. Life no longer means anything to him, and the only thing left is darkness. The gunman decides to take the final step, and end his misery but not before he takes as many people as he can. Men, Women, even Children are not safe when the gunman makes his last stand.

giabao100 giabao100 Aug 21, 2012
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xxstuckinpsychosisxx xxstuckinpsychosisxx Jun 13, 2011
To put it simply, it's a masterpiece. It really puts you in the mind of the gunman ... makes you question society a little.
                              
                              Awesome work (:
                              Dev 
misslinda misslinda Nov 28, 2010
P.S. The rest is awesome. Enough said. 
                              Sad, but also good. Reality, basically. 
misslinda misslinda Nov 28, 2010
Brian,
                              I'm going to be brutally honest:
                              I've only read the first part and I think you suck...for being so brilliant.  
                              The title, concept, and writing style are very creative and original. 
                              
                              Anyways, I'm going to go back to read. I hope the rest of the story is as awesome. 
                              
                              -Linda 
Kaleda Kaleda Sep 23, 2010
I really like the title, it's so unique and attention-grabbing :)
                              ~Kaleda.
JustOneOtherGirl JustOneOtherGirl Sep 17, 2010
This is an AMAZING start !! *votes* ;)
                              you are really talented!! *becomes fan*
                              =D *goes to read part two*!!