A MAGE IN NARUTO!? (Book 1) (Completed)

A MAGE IN NARUTO!? (Book 1) (Completed)

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Elle is happy as pie :3 By happyaspie Completed

Look at the title and you'll know.

Its interesting but not as good as other people so don't expect good things.

Bye my fellow readers!!

LeviChu LeviChu Aug 19
Maybe change 'Getting' to 'Arriving'
                              'Arriving to the guild was oddly painful' is what I would write. Its up to you
LeviChu LeviChu Aug 19
Add a space in between the names. 'Wendy, Gajeel, Juvia, Lissana, Happy, Pantherlily and Carla
LeviChu LeviChu Aug 19
'Were not sure' or 'didn't know of what' you spelt 'of' wrong. I prefer the first one
LeviChu LeviChu Aug 19
I find it a bit ooc of Gajeel to speak like that... with the "umm" since he's more of the confident type
happyaspie happyaspie May 25, 2015
@Cheshire333 really?!? that means a lot thanks I thought that I was doing terrible XD