Look at the title and you'll know.
Its interesting but not as good as other people so don't expect good things.
Bye my fellow readers!!
Maybe change 'Getting' to 'Arriving'
'Arriving to the guild was oddly painful' is what I would write. Its up to you
Suicides alittle touchy for me, my friend had killed herself not too long ago, but the detail is amazing and I'm throughly loving this book
Add a space in between the names. 'Wendy, Gajeel, Juvia, Lissana, Happy, Pantherlily and Carla
'Were not sure' or 'didn't know of what' you spelt 'of' wrong. I prefer the first one
I find it a bit ooc of Gajeel to speak like that... with the "umm" since he's more of the confident type
@Cheshire333 really?!? that means a lot thanks I thought that I was doing terrible XD