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His Guardian Angel (Phanfic)

His Guardian Angel (Phanfic)

45.3K Reads 2.9K Votes 12 Part Story
Dawnstopher By dawnstopherdun Completed

Dan Howell lived alone in his flat. Or at least he thought. Things would randomly happen like if he lost something it would randomly appear next to him out of nowhere. If he was having a bad day things that made Dan happy would be randomly right next to him. What happens when he finally sees the gorgeous creature (Phil Lester) that lives with him? Read on to find out. 
(First phanfic. Hope you guys like my story. ^-^ Picture cover does not belong to me. No trigger warnings. ^-^)

I love it! It's amazing and it's also crazy that I found somebody with almost the exact same writing style as me. I think it would also be super cool to have Phil's POV. ((It might be there but I need to keep reading))
TakeAPhilPill TakeAPhilPill Jul 15, 2016
Not trying to seem rude but you should learn the difference between "then" and "than"
dawnstopherdun dawnstopherdun Dec 06, 2016
Thanks. I guess. I'm trying to write better. So give me credit for that at least.
That would be so scary for me if missing stuff randomly appeared
--drowninglessons --drowninglessons Jun 25, 2016
Also, another thing I noticed (and forgot to add) is that it switches from first person to third? Is that supposed to happen?
LuciferIsMyMainBitch LuciferIsMyMainBitch Mar 27, 2016
It's good so far. Writing takes practice we weren't born writers. If you want more comments j would suggest breaking this up into smaller paragraphs.