The alphas young mate

The alphas young mate

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"Mate." Alex growled. "Um... Are you feeling alright?" Michelle asked cautiously she was only fourteen. And Alex was nineteen. There was no way this could be happening. He growled again and pushed her up against the wall. So she did the only thing she could think of. She kicked him in the crotch and ran screaming: "HOLY BISCUITS IM TOO YOUNG!!" Then she tripped over a nerf gun and fell down the stairs.

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man i cant beleive she would go there dressed like that me ild have to get dressed   girl must be either stupid or brave
Tabdog Tabdog May 01
I don't know if you meant to, but you switched from third to first. I do it all the time!!!
AlphaWolf_PackLeader AlphaWolf_PackLeader Dec 31, 2015
A comma between 'cabin' and 'the' and members rank should be members' ranks. Also, I would suggest taking out 'was'
AlphaWolf_PackLeader AlphaWolf_PackLeader Dec 31, 2015
Granny's not grannies because there is only one being talked about at this moment and it shows possession between the grandma and her bed. It's her granny's bed.
fictionlover_909 fictionlover_909 Oct 27, 2015
Wow a need fun I haven't started reading but the subscription is awesome
boysOvaflower boysOvaflower Sep 21, 2015
that is not fair she didnt get the opportunity to have tons of boyfreinds n get drunk