Mafia King Wife (unedited)

Mafia King Wife (unedited)

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Keke By Kekekardashian Completed

Diana always been a shy girl she attended Bresica college she is smart and beautiful she just Finnish her first year at college and it was summer time she and her twin sister natayla, her bestfriend marie had plan all year to visit Italy for the summer but she wasnt planning to meet one of the most powerful man in italy ....

The book haven't been edited there been no correction at all ..

CamryPaige CamryPaige Apr 19
Quotation marks would be a nice addition to separate people talking and the story text. I highly recommend it so it is easier to read and we know where people are and are not talking.
Rdiyaa Rdiyaa Mar 13, 2016
Am trying to read it, but your sentences are all rumble up :/
                              There might be someone willing to help you.
serenamukisa serenamukisa Mar 24, 2016
That's why people write on watpad  ,because it gives them a chance to have their dreams.And we learn from our mistakes by practicing,
It's hard to read when there's no punctuation to separate the conversation.. You should at least add some before publish so other could still enjoy reading even tho there a lot to edit.. Btw nice story,  keep up the good work 👍
Can i recommend a beta? They overlook your work before you post them and no offence but if you want this story to be good you should get yourself a beta
Agroener Agroener Sep 30, 2015
This is one long sentence.  Just the teacher in me picking that up. Use punctuations,they help.