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The Muted Mate

The Muted Mate

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Addicted_to_u By _Addicted_to_you Updated Apr 12

Jane Caruz, A girl who lost her mom at 5. That is when her dad started abusing her. But then at 8 she got a step mom that kept on drinking and hits in occasionally. And because of all these life actions. She has become mute unable to speak to any one.

William Tubeo a alpha of the Star Pack. While almost everyone has found a mate he still haven't. And the pack needs one for help.

What happens when Jane moves. Then William meets her. Will she accept or deny? Who will change who's life?

15rscooby 15rscooby Jan 13
Its not too bad so far and I will keep reading but I think you need to work on the speech a bit. I know they are meant to be abusive and horrible, but it seems unrealistic and like you are trying to use every 'mean' word you can think of and sticking at the end of a commans