In Love With My Best Friend~Rilaya~

In Love With My Best Friend~Rilaya~

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Jarzarmax By Jarzarmax Completed

Maya figures about her feelings towards Riley. What is she going to do? Will Riley Know?
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Hope you enjoy, just wanted to write something, I guess. Tell me what you think about it. Don't know how much I will update, but I hope I will not abandon this story. If you have any ideas message me or comment. So enjoy ~Jarzarmax~

Okay not critizing but why do you keep switch to 2nd person POV?
What's up with directness with the readers it's throwing me off.
alexiswaters0808 alexiswaters0808 Dec 26, 2015
I like it but u need to use "i" instead of "you" when Maya does or says something
lovecheese1234567890 lovecheese1234567890 Dec 14, 2015
Why do you put you instead of I I mean it is  Maya's pov why can't she says I?
RebeccaBermudez RebeccaBermudez Oct 07, 2015
You don't should say you said or you, you, and you.. Just please put right words.
cieirrah cieirrah May 09, 2015
You should not say you said or you did after Maya does somthing but I like it