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Hunter Mate EDITED

Hunter Mate EDITED

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Janet379146 By Janet379146 Updated Feb 12

I was walking streets of New York. It was midnight it was raining more like drizzling many people pass me many people had umbrellas for what it wasn't raining hard 

 Someone was following me I sniff the air a vampire I went inside the bar and sat down " don't you think your a bit young to be here " I look sideways to see a guy  18 years old I was still 17 my birthday was in a week

I stood up and heading for the door someone grab my arm it was the same guy that talk to me I look up and saw his facial features he was handsome green eyes black hair (werewolf  )" let go sir " I said " I am not that old " he said everyone in bar laugh he let go I was out the door 
 I was  still walking. when something grab my  arm and pull me to a alley " hello there " it was the vampire

I honestly like the plot but after trying to read this, i immediately lost interest.  The story is all over the place and the english is very broken and tends to jumps around... A lot. It just confuses me.
Nawilina Nawilina May 29, 2016
Pls don't forget to read my story " justice" it'd mean a lot to me