The Sister Of Madara Uchiha

The Sister Of Madara Uchiha

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Katsui Megami By LucyTheHorse Updated Sep 26

Yumi was only six when the war between the Uchiha clan and Senju clan stared. Yumi Uchiha is the younger sister of Madara and Izuna Uchiha. Madara treasures her above anything else. Today was the day Madara was going to be named clan head along with his brother but when their clan is attacked by Senju clan and Madara best friend Hashirama Senju and his brother Tobi are leading it! He choses to protect Yumi rather than fight. But Hashirama chases Madara and Yumi. Madara and Yumi are seperated and Hashirama ends up pushing Yumi off a cliff! But her Snowy Sharingan activates opening a portal and dumping her 100 years in the futer. She only has her war offit and cerimonial dress ,along with a locket her brother gave her when she was 6. She also gave her brother one and they haven't taken them off ever. It allows Yumi to feel the heartbeat of her brother and her brother hers.  Yumi has allowed no one to touch it but Madara and that is her only clue leading her to know her brother is alive! Can she find him? And how will he react seeing his sister  for the first time in 100 years?

what?? there's no any " I love you nii-san" what the 😂😂 
                              Sorry 😂😂
All i see is a blank page and no text :o im confused. Am I the only one with thus problem?:o
I don't understand  when they talk or not. Can you please put in "quotation".
Akame-chi Akame-chi Apr 23
Can you put quotation mark. Not to be rude but you should study Direct and Indirect Speech to make your story better.
NerezzaRPG NerezzaRPG May 05
Without quotations, it's difficult to distinguish if its part of the actual text or if they are talking. Please edit and add quotations
Please... if you don't want to put quotation marks, then just please... just do anything to differentiate the dialogue...
                              The story is pretty interesting, but sadly, It's slightly discouraging to read because I have a hard time reading it.
                              But, have to day the story is pretty good. :)