all my thoughts and crazy ass ideas.. personal experiences put here
So many feelings expressed with simple words.....
You are very talented
wow, that was really well written, its repetitive which just adds to the hurt she feels. Maybe a repetitious rape? Seriously well written, really upsetting.
So sad...but I liked how the simple words made me think deeper..I really liked it :)
I actually knew what it was about just from readin it. You got your point across very well. I like it. Normally I prefer a ryhming scheme, but this was well worth the read.
veryy intresting, thanks for the author note by the end fyi :D
Wow you are very empathetic and most of the best writers have to be like that to write great stories so obviously you are writer with talent