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Braelyn By bgb240 Updated Aug 11, 2011

all my thoughts and crazy ass ideas.. personal experiences put here

readitbackwards readitbackwards Jan 01, 2014
So many feelings expressed with simple words.....
                              You are very talented
xPixie xPixie Aug 12, 2011
wow, that was really well written, its repetitive which just adds to the hurt she feels. Maybe a repetitious rape? Seriously well written, really upsetting.
musicalnotes_ musicalnotes_ Jan 22, 2011
So sad...but I liked how the simple words made me think deeper..I really liked it :) 
LuckyLeann LuckyLeann Oct 25, 2010
I actually knew what it was about just from readin it. You got your point across very well. I like it. Normally I prefer a ryhming scheme, but this was well worth the read.
HaydenGardner HaydenGardner Oct 18, 2010
veryy intresting, thanks for the author note by the end fyi :D
chairsniffa chairsniffa Sep 25, 2010
Wow you are very empathetic and most of the best writers have to be like that to write great stories so obviously you are writer with talent