It's  always you

It's always you

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Nandu By Oceanic_loner Completed

Forgetting someone who gave you so much to remember is difficult........

Oceanic_loner Oceanic_loner Dec 27, 2015
Thanks for letting me know . It's like I can never find out my mistakes, especially spelling and typos , I always read it in the right way *it's kind of creepy
NishatAmber NishatAmber Dec 27, 2015
Btw, I think there is a typo in the 20th line where you have written 'search or your voice'. I think you wanted to write 'search for your voice'. Just wanted to point this out so that people don't miss out on the beauty of the line:-)
NishatAmber NishatAmber Dec 27, 2015
This one kind of made me cry. I have read a lot of poems about betrayal and heartbreak but somehow these simple words carry more emotions and a sense of vulnerability that I haven't seen in other such poems.
Aneesah_786 Aneesah_786 Jun 20, 2015
Another very good book really enjoyed it, may I ask if u have snapchat cuz I would like to add u