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high school sex life

high school sex life

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friendly57 By friendly57 Updated 12 hours ago

" I want you to know I want you just as much as you want me " . I stepped away from Brandon and said " I don't know what your talking about I'm not ready yet " 

He looked at me with those dark grey eyes and said " baby you need to let yourself feel again i'm not your step dad " . I put my arms around his neck and  we slid down to the  floor where he just held me 
i'm finally letting my tough act go and let him seep through the cracks

Um can you make the dialog a bit more organized and detailed, please, it's just that I can't read it that well, but I do like your story...
coppertop05 coppertop05 Nov 09, 2015
my advice to you is to use words other then said... i just started reading this and the whole thing sounds like someone telling there friends a text conversation in a he said she said format.
                              try using words like replied, informed, yelled, or dont use as much dialogue :)