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Game of Thrones: The lost Targaryen (Jon Snow Fanfic)

Game of Thrones: The lost Targaryen (Jon Snow Fanfic)

39.4K Reads 735 Votes 13 Part Story
Diana By DianaIsabel1D Completed

"It becomes harder and harder to breath and from nowhere I start to hear some footsteps that I believe to be just my imagination but then a men with long dark hair and equally dark bear and eyes looks at me curious.
-Who are you? - He says and I try to speak but my voice just doesn't come out.
For the dark clothes I immediately know that he must be a men from the Night's Watch. With an enormous difficulty I lift my harm and touch is bear. His face seems incredibly harm...
-Aldith... - I whisper and he grabs me in his strong harms.
I try to say 'thank you' but I feel too weak and give up on the idea. Even though I don't know him I just know that I can trust him and so I leave my body to rest in his arms and let darkness invade my mind."

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HaileyJJSprack HaileyJJSprack Apr 01, 2016
Ur English is super good. There's mistakes here and there but gret
HarrysOnlyyAngel HarrysOnlyyAngel Aug 27, 2016
Change the word soap, it is actually spelled soup, soap is the thing that you use to wash your body. I was a bit confused at first.
UglyAssCryptid UglyAssCryptid Aug 27, 2016
This is so good, your English is better than mine and I am English!!
CursedFanGirlForever CursedFanGirlForever Sep 10, 2016
I liked the first chapter and your english isn't too bad. Good job! 😃
Smartiepants217 Smartiepants217 Jul 16, 2016
Considering I've seen worse writing from people who have English as their main language, you pass my test with flying colors!
CursedFanGirlForever CursedFanGirlForever Sep 10, 2016
I hate to be that person, but I'm really annoyed by the lack of quotation marks.