The Surfer Hottie<3

The Surfer Hottie<3

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jax((; By jackieeM Updated Jan 01, 2013

Sixteen year old Melanie Brooks left everything behind in her old town including her two best friends, Baylie and Liam. Melanie has a crush on Liam, and she thought of Baylie as a sister. So she wasnt really looking forward to moving hundreds of miles away from them to california, but she had to because her mom sent her away to live with her aunt. She then meets Damon Peirce, the jerk and player at the school. They both end up surfing together on a team, and at school they had every class together. They always arguee and dont get along , so why is it that Melanie enjoys being with him? they are always together. As Damon gets to know Melanie more he starts leaving his player ways and loses interest in other girls. Baylie and Liam visit her often and Melanie is confused and doesnt know if she and Liam will ever be anything more than friends, or if she should just go for Damon.

ashirwinislife ashirwinislife Sep 29, 2014
yup, surfers are the best... probably why i chose to do the sport in the first place. Wave + hot guys = girls best friends <3
abstayx abstayx Sep 26, 2012
I find your writing so easy to read which is perfect!
                              I am still reading and I love it so far!
                              The title pulled me in so much...
                              I am a sucker for surfers!
                              Love it and will continue to read! <3
                              abstayx
ThePatriotAngel ThePatriotAngel Sep 26, 2012
Liam seems like a very popular name in these stories! in every book o read theres a liam! I like baylie though. She's funny! your six gids are about to be here! hahahahahahahaha! FUNNY!!!
McPrettysince93 McPrettysince93 Dec 08, 2011
yeaaah i agree with these wattpaders! paragraphs a little too together but... I LOVE Melanie and Liam they are so cutee<3
jackieeM jackieeM Nov 19, 2011
@xoRobinEggBlue101 @xoxoElmoworld123 @ducksnleaves @HIndia @Yeahbabyyeah  thank you guys so much!!<3 i will try to seperate the paragraphs from now on((:
ducksnleaves ducksnleaves Nov 19, 2011
Yeah, like every1 said, divide into smaller paragraphs. Its making my head swim. other wise, good job!