Pain, hurt, betrayal. That's all Percy Jackson former hero of Olympus felt when Nathan West came. Everyone betrayed him except for Jason, Piper, Frank, Hazel, Leo, Nico, Thalia and Chiron.
Can you pls improve dialougue, grammar and spelling? It's hard to understand your writing.
Nico... Have u been giving charity to strangers? How sweet, but it's creepy.
Not being rude cuz so far it's good but Kronos isn't a primordal he's a Titan, and plz rember I am not trying to offend you
so lucus is egyptian, percy runs away from percy cliche and what?
So he goes on a tour before finding where and who the heck he is