The Broken Hero (Percy Jackson Fanfiction)

The Broken Hero (Percy Jackson Fanfiction)

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Brickbuilder21 By StarWarsFan4Life Completed

Pain, hurt, betrayal. That's all Percy Jackson former hero of Olympus felt when  Nathan West came. Everyone betrayed him except for Jason, Piper, Frank, Hazel, Leo, Nico, Thalia and Chiron.

IvianTan IvianTan Sep 22, 2016
Can you pls improve dialougue, grammar and spelling? It's hard to understand your writing.
koolangelsweets koolangelsweets Nov 28, 2016
Nico... Have u been giving charity to strangers? How sweet, but it's creepy.
RaymondFisk RaymondFisk Jul 31, 2016
Not being rude cuz so far it's good but Kronos isn't a primordal he's a Titan, and plz rember I am not trying to offend you
silentshadowklrturbo silentshadowklrturbo Nov 07, 2016
so lucus is egyptian, percy runs away from percy cliche and what?
Look4_BananaPants Look4_BananaPants Apr 09, 2016
So he goes on a tour before finding where and who the heck he is