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If Only he Could See

If Only he Could See

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Lexi By vballlexi14 Updated Jun 08, 2016

Heaven Durango is a beautiful girl who seems to have everything she wants and could ever have. She has the best friends and the best siblings. She really seems to have everything going for her. Only Heaven has a secret, she is abused by her father. Heaven has one person who she tells and only one person who she thinks understands, her brother's best friend, Josh. Josh is her safe haven. Until one day when fate takes a turn for the worse. Can Heaven and Josh overcome what life throws at them? Will Heaven ever be the girl everyone wants her to be?

vballlexi14 vballlexi14 Jul 04, 2011
@XxShyAnimeArtistxX thanks so much! I will for sure do that from now on. I totally appreciate your feedback and I'm very greatful for it! Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. Your comment made me smile. So once again thank you and I really mean that. :)
CynicalSelle CynicalSelle Jun 14, 2011
I really like this! I don't have time to continue reading it yet though because I have to leave the computer, but as soon as I get back, I'm reading the rest of the chapters!!! :)
Ashhii Ashhii Jun 07, 2011
WOW just started reading this and I must say I really like it, you have a really good beginning :) x 
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jan 03, 2011
This is nice but I kinda felt awkward when she was talking about her hotness.... Other than that, it's very good! :)
RunnerGirl2013 RunnerGirl2013 Dec 15, 2010
pshh----finals shminals:) haha jk;p do you have hot water now, stinky? ;p haha jk
vballlexi14 vballlexi14 Dec 15, 2010
@RunnerGirl2013 I can't I'm with Katherine were studying for finals.