The Bad Boy Saved Me

The Bad Boy Saved Me

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Alyssa Danielle Shephard By daniellealyssa13 Updated Nov 24

Kayla Dawson has been abused by her father Jackson since her mother Carol died from the worst beating from her father. She loves her little brother Ryan and sister Paige. She does everything she can to protect them. She's 17 at the moment and as she turns 18 she's going to adopt them and leave. If either Ryan or Paige cries he'll try to beat them with whatever he can find. He's left multiple bruises on Kayla's body and only about two on Ryan and Paige.

 Most of the time he beats them he's either drunk, pissed or both. All bad for them. Paige and Ryan are only four years old. Kayla usually takes the beating for them, they're too little to handle it. Her best friends Rain and Maya know about it and are always there to get them out if it gets too intense.  Kayla takes them to preschool every morning along with taking herself and friends to school. 
One day the bad boy hottie Carter James moves in next door. One night things go too far;can Carter save her or will she end up like her mom?

jezz132 jezz132 Sep 25
Edit this please its pretty good but you NEED spacing and to correct your spelling/grammar
Seriously?!?! If her friends know why don't they tell the damn police?!?! Holy shît
I HAVE A BABY BROTHER TOO, AND I SWEAR IF ANYONE MAKES HIM FEEL BAD OR HURTS HIM, IMMA BE ONE ENRAGED BÍTCH
If course not..... No girl is ever going to believe 100% that they're talented...
FCSeagles2014 FCSeagles2014 Jun 10, 2015
Her car is really fancy for someone in her situation. It wouldn't seem like her dad would let her have something like that. I do like the car though.
FCSeagles2014 FCSeagles2014 Jun 10, 2015
This is really well written. Please continue to update this!