Suzume of the Sand is Gaara's twin sister. Because she was born second, it is Gaara who has the sand-wielding ability of the One Tail, Shukaku. What is Suzume's true power?
This is great! I like how you describe Gaara and don't make him sound really fake. It actually sounds like something he would say to somebody he likes.
Wow, last time I started reading this was when only four chapters were published, nice progress! :)
I haven't started reading it yet, but I can tell its going to be awesome! I started out a few days or weeks ago so don't worry.