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Lose Control | Book 1

Lose Control | Book 1

674K Reads 16.4K Votes 22 Part Story
Ashley By ashley_niccole Completed


❝It is so hard to stay away from you, but I know I need too. But the thing is, I can't help myself around you. You make me lose all the control and senses I have.❞

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Summer in California is a time for thrills and adventure for a fun loving girl like Jessica. And, considering it's the last summer before heading off to college, she's determined to make it the best summer yet with beach parties, clubs, and tanning, not to mention hot guys! But, in her plans for a California adventure there were never any room for Talon, her brother's super hot and charming best friend. Coming back for the summer, he's a lot more to handle than Jess remembered him being. It's been a year, and since then she's forgotten how incredibly irresistible he is and the attraction they had for one another. But the year apart has changed more than just Talon. Jess herself is a lot more to handle with a new level of attractiveness that is maybe just too much for this guy. With the budding chemistry, Talon finds himself in a little deep with this newly blossomed beauty. No matter how strong the pull, he can't want her. . Or can he? Because after all, she is. . His best friend's little sister.

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(Please watch the Trailer for more!! Made by @Tainted_Red)

- Please COMMENT & VOTE throughout the story! I'd greatly appreciate it!

✳ The story's sequel is called 'We Lost Control' ✳

DistantPaths DistantPaths Aug 04, 2016
All I have to do is stand in the Sun for like five minutes and I'm already tan like wtf. I got a dark golden tan last year. Mine isn't golden this year but it's dark, making me look mixed but I'm not lol.
livertreats livertreats Jan 21, 2016
Preppy? Not sure if that's the correct word for this sentence. Maybe "vain"
Kyles_thebear Kyles_thebear Jan 15, 2016
Where did you get the clips for the trailer thing? Like what show or movie or whatever?
Tiger1333 Tiger1333 Nov 15, 2015
U should take your own advice cuz your blind that he likes u oooooooooo this is gonna be so good!!!!!!
DeonahFrancis DeonahFrancis Oct 03, 2015
I think I read this book before witch is really sad because I was totally happy to find a good book to read
Dead_Flowers_In_Bed Dead_Flowers_In_Bed Sep 10, 2015
Oh no,  you do not just simply put on udergarmments...  you should know how hard it is to actually get a bra clipped in the back