Yaoi is boy X boy, creepypasta is scary internet stories, hope you like and I'm open for requests but I don't do oc's (own creation/character)
I saw the little messenger thingy so I clicked on it and saw I could send this to one of my friends. But I ex'd out of it and said: I'm not sending this to my friends XD
*nose bleed* I have internal bleeding that's how big my nose bleed is.
I know it's your first yaoi, and I like the general idea, but there are some rushed area. First off, here's some help for more stories: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SoYouWantTo/WriteAGoodYaoi
I use that site for my yaoi help.
Quick tip: Dont write Tobys Name too often use He or Him for a change ^^
*silently records this* heh heh heh
You is gonna be on interwebs
*parents grab my phone* parents- this is really good writing
Parents- yeah I can get how you masterbate to this
me- WHY WOULD YOU.