Don't Let Go

Don't Let Go

1.1K Reads 34 Votes 13 Part Story
Sam By BadmintonGurl Updated Mar 08, 2012

Charlotte Bryson has never had it easy. First, her brother got killed by a drunken robber when he was only fourteen. Now, her parents are pushing a divorce and her best friends might be leaving town. As Charlie isolates herself farther and farther away from the world, a new set of challenges fly her way. Will she become successful in these challenges, or will they triumph over her? She doesn't have a clue. All she knows is that she doesn't want anyone else to let her go.

ZafArielZul ZafArielZul Jul 06, 2011
its a good start to the story. but a little tip, it is better to start a story with more descriptive story telling, dialogue is fine but it creates a lot more impact. 
vampirefreak vampirefreak Jan 13, 2011
:O O M G YOU NEEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO CONTIUE THIS ! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UPLOAD SOON ! :D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;D;DD;D;D