That's How We Fell For Each Other

That's How We Fell For Each Other

38.9K Reads 769 Votes 19 Part Story
Abhi By SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld Completed

This is a story about Alex and Shon.
Where Shon is a jerk and Alex is a new girl in town. 
In their first meeting Alex doesn't give him that attention that every girl gives to him and rejected him for dance. Sean was never treated like this before by a girl. He took a challenge to made Alex fall for him and then dump her as usual.
So it all started with a bet...

loony_gal loony_gal Aug 09, 2013
WOW! mum and dad talking about their love story is amazing! :D
SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld Jun 16, 2012
@colorme yeah its kinda sounds like how i met your mother but plot is totally different....:-)
SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld Apr 21, 2012
@love17 yeah i know this one's short coz wen i first uploaded this chap i wanted to know that readers like the idea of this story or not and i shud continue or not...and i am trying to make the rest chaps longer...thanks btw...:-)
AnnabelleSmithson AnnabelleSmithson Apr 21, 2012
Hey! I think you should modify the summary, make it a more catchy maybe?
                              It attracts the readers.
                              And also, add a little more narration! It helps readers to visualise and make it more intresting!
                              I really like the idea of the story :)
                              
                              No offence!
                              Voted.
                              Love17
SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld SmiLeAndRoCKTheWrld Feb 29, 2012
@Dark-Shadow so it just corrected the mistakes like grammatical etc etc...and this is the first so its just like intro...when i first uploaded it i just wanna know if people liked the idea or not...and now am trying to makes other chaps longer...:-)
Dark-Shadow Dark-Shadow Feb 29, 2012
@storyriter  oooh,,, seriously ? wow, but shouldn't an editor add more ideas or somethin ?