Shadow Runner - Don't read this one

Shadow Runner - Don't read this one

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dreamybanana By dreamybanana Updated Aug 18, 2010

Rogue was born to be a runner, but she'll die in the shadows without anyone knowing the good she has risked her life for. 
Doing back flips off of buildings is in the job description and being kept in the dark was the whole point. But when someone sheds a little light into the ways of the Shadow Runners, chaos begins to unfold along with answers Rogue never wanted to uncover.

mysterydude mysterydude Feb 08, 2013
This is really interesting. It's kind of hard to follow, because it's so detailed, though. Maybe you could make more paragraphs or something?
                              
                              It's very intriguing, though.
darcysadinosaur darcysadinosaur Feb 05, 2013
That was really good!! I have absolutely no complaints (which is kinda rare). I loved it. =)
Itzscar Itzscar Jan 20, 2013
It's so cool! I love how you describe her momentum! It's detailed but not boring! You're a really good writer! It's also sad that her mother died but I love the idea of Shadow Runner.
dreamybanana dreamybanana May 02, 2011
Ok, this isn't the latest edit, but I'm no longer showing this novel on this site. I'm hoping i can take this story all the way, so this is all I'm going to show for now.
                              
                              Thanks for reading.
dreamybanana dreamybanana Apr 12, 2011
@dumpygirl Thanks, I do spend ages working on this. Months really...although I just realised this isn't my last draft...I've been away for a while. Thanks for such a lovely comment.
                              
                              @elizabeth-claire Thank you, I hope you mean it! Still, really appreciate the comment.
DaStrangeOne DaStrangeOne Dec 10, 2010
I think it's a great story! Very engaging and definatly makes me want to read on. I seriously thought he/she was just jumping off the the building to begin with...thank goodness she didn't.