Girl And The Vampire- Book 1 (Supernatural F...
Athelstan Kirkley Moren is a Vampire Prince and future king of his people. Cursed by a grieving witch to never leave his castle until he finds his soul mate and marries her, all before he turns 600. That time is fast approaching and he has given up all hope.
His parents desperately wanting to retire have tried to have another son to no avail. And in a last attempt to free there son hold one last contest. The contest is a short story and the winner wins a trip for two to there home in England all expenses paid.
Ella Marie Holmes is a hard working housekeeper with the passion for writing anything that pops into mind. Her best friend and room mate, Bridget Lee Scotts, steals one of her stories and enters it in her own name. Winning the contest the two find themselves in an out of time castle with a vampire prince wanting nothing more then to feed off them. Ella soon finds her dreams plagued by a women, who shows her what will become of them as they stay in the odd home.
Will Athlestan become free? Will Ella find peace? Only as the past brings the present to it's knee's will the truth finally be found.
Authors Request: I am working on editing this story and would really like some feed back as to what I should add(such as Details), or any spots that are unclear. I have also been having a heard time trying to rewrite the pub scene and the "Peter Pan" statue scene. If anybody could help me with that I'd greatly appropriate it as I've never seen either other than in a picture or movie. And I would like to be able to described these scenes properly. I also would like to know if there is any kind of scent that could possibly stand out in these places. Thank you EoffAngel.