Kidnapped By My Over Obsessed Alpha Mate

Kidnapped By My Over Obsessed Alpha Mate

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departed_lost_souls By departed_lost_souls Updated Feb 22, 2017

Kim doesn't know about her family secret until one day a strange but good looking guy claims to be her ' mate '. Without hesitation he took her forcefully, but Kim isn't the one to give up. Will she give in to love or fight for her freedom?

WARNING: may contain course and sexual language

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  • adventure
  • love
  • mate
  • mature
  • mystery
  • romance
  • werewolf
MishaIsMyRealName MishaIsMyRealName Oct 15, 2016
That's it?
                              For a fighter she gave up on answers from her mom pretty quickly
LadyPolka LadyPolka Jan 25, 2016
After the growl, wouldn't it be a comma, and after petrified a period? Otherwise good story!
wild3st_dr3ams wild3st_dr3ams Aug 12, 2015
I love how you don't space out the paragraphs. That's how normal books are and it's the proper way to type. Thank you!!
-maudit -maudit Jul 10, 2015
Maybe you should space out the dialogue bc its kinda hard to follow along but I love the story so far! it was just a suggestion
- - Jun 26, 2015
Would you mind taking a look at my story?? I would really appreciate it, I am asking good writers to give my feedback. Thanks!!
- - Jun 26, 2015
It feels so real.. I know it's good writing when I feel like I am there