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Coma (Percy jackson fanfiction)

Coma (Percy jackson fanfiction)

66.9K Reads 1.7K Votes 25 Part Story
Palirroia Carstairs By poseidon-cabin3 Completed

what will happen if Percy goes into  a coma ? Are there anymore problems coming his way?

  • angst
  • annabeth
  • coma
  • fanfiction
  • gaia
  • infirmary
  • percabeth
  • percy
  • pjo
  • wattys2016
Yaaaa... there are monsters around you..... okay.... just ignore them....
Did anyone else realize that half of the story repeated itself again??
You may want to say something about the empousa being gone now...
                              just trying to help :P
thisaccountisdead58 thisaccountisdead58 Nov 22, 2017
Just some constructive criticism: The vocabulary and everything is really good but I would edit it a little more. (Also it’s not that you need it but I have a cover shop :3)
iceboxwomen iceboxwomen Apr 02, 2017
i just heard the most horrible thing they are making a LIGHTING THIFE MUSICAL they allredy made horribel movies i mean gods why >:<
The story was repeated. Three times, in some places. Also, I couldn't understand the chapter in general. There were quite a few errors and it was very redundant.