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Pen Your Pride
Not Life But Mind

Not Life But Mind

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Marie GalacgacPhipps By WaterRoseSeven Updated Mar 13, 2017

poetry is my passion...and i may not be the best at it, but its something to take with me wherever i go. some poems can be dark...many were written in a dark moment of my life. If you'd like you can post in the comments a challenge, pick a topic and I shall try write a poem about it. I am very open to criticism and advice, so please go ahead and comment.

  • anger
  • curiosity
  • death
  • dreams
  • happiness
  • happy
  • heartbreak
  • life
  • love
  • passion
  • random
  • sad
  • teen
  • wonder
  • youth
uraza_abeke uraza_abeke Aug 21, 2016
*you're. One of the most common grammar mistakes ever made so don't feel bad. I do it too
uraza_abeke uraza_abeke Aug 21, 2016
Capital letters at the beginning of a paragraph and sentence. This is necessary for most of the lines in this chapter but I'll just let you sort the rest out
uraza_abeke uraza_abeke Aug 21, 2016
I is always capital. Again, I'll put this here and you can just fix up any other lowercase I's yourself.
uraza_abeke uraza_abeke Aug 21, 2016
It's. Because 'it's' is a compound word, the words 'it' and 'is' smooshed together, there needs to be an apostrophe where that missing 'i' is