Rules of Masquerade: An Alternate Ending

Rules of Masquerade: An Alternate Ending

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Zaf.Ariel.Zul By ZafArielZul Updated Jan 29, 2013

The story picks up at the end of chapter thirty, when Charlotte had jilted William at the altar. This alternate ending to Rules had been written for quite some time, with the help of my trusted friend, @NinjaAssasin, who act as my unpaid editor (to whom I am entirely grateful).

So, without further ado, I present you: 

Rules of Masquerade: Alternate Ending
Rules of Masquerade 31

At first he heard nothing - neither the buzzing whispers and murmurs of guests nor the inquiries from the priest. All he heard was the echo of her rejection vibrating in the corners of his mind. His eyes kept seeing the rivulet of tears streaming from her eyes. She did nothing to staunch the flow as it ran down her cheeks.

William swallowed hard. His heart was hammering with a vengeance.

William kept staring at the door where Charlotte had disappeared to until finally most parties sitting on the front pew stood up. His grandfather, stern man that he was, was gaping with anger in his eyes. Sitting in eithe...

  • alternate
  • courtship
  • ending
  • engagement
  • love
  • regency
  • romantic
farah2121 farah2121 Apr 02, 2017
The original one is just great! Absolutely perfect!!!!
                               I love your writing.
C_Collier C_Collier Sep 28, 2014
I have to say, I like your alt ending better that the one connected to the story. I vote you drop the other one and replace it with this one as soon as possible.
AlizahMarshall AlizahMarshall Jan 19, 2013
I really like it, but seeing as I'm reading your other story it annoys me about rafe a callie, but I really love you writing keep it up
IvetteChing IvetteChing Jan 19, 2013
I like this better I feel that Charlie have to give some suffer to will :p
rainblu13 rainblu13 Jan 17, 2013
                              please don't leave it like that...
                              i like it cause it means that its longer XD
                              and its actually funner to have more... :) please continue...
Prism07 Prism07 Jan 16, 2013
I loved it... No offence but in the previous version Charlie seemed to forgive Will way too quickly. This version comes across as more realistic,gives both the characters a chance to grow and learn from their mistakes. Well,that is just what I think... :)