The Protectors

The Protectors

4.4K Reads 82 Votes 9 Part Story
Elijah By Medieval Updated Nov 21, 2010

Tyre, one of the few people left alive after werewolves tried to destroy the world, must protect his village as they try to stay alive.

elizabeth94 elizabeth94 Jan 21, 2011
Sounds pretty interesting. Neat idea, cool detail, so far so good. You got my votes. :)
                              
                              *~.~* Lizzie Liz
BrittanyKenway BrittanyKenway Jan 17, 2011
I like it but its a bit of a mouth full, alot to take in, in other words. Other than that I like it :D
adrianasntlln adrianasntlln Oct 03, 2010
i like the flow of the story. Sorry it took so long for me to read :) ur story has a nice symmetry to it. Neither the dialogue or the narration over powers the other. 
Medieval Medieval Sep 24, 2010
Thanks for the comment aieslyn, I made some changes to it now.
thecriticalgurl thecriticalgurl Sep 23, 2010
Its pretty good so far, though you are missing a few characters. Also, I think it lacks any emotional depth, which makes it hard to connect to the characters.
                              
                              the criticalgurl.