Capturing the leader's heart (an Eric/OC)

Capturing the leader's heart (an Eric/OC)

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Abby_kebabby By Abby_kebabby Updated Nov 03, 2015

Aurelia was born in Amity and from her bright smile and kind personality everyone believes that Aurelia belongs there, but when the Dauntless and more importantly Eric visits Amity, sparks can't help but start to fly, and before you know it a dark secret is between them which could either break them or bring them together, it probably doesn't help that she is also divergent and joins Dauntless.  
This is set during tris's initiation, but no insurgent or allegient, completely different storyline

  • amity
  • baby
  • candorordauntless
  • dauntless
  • divergent
  • eric
  • fourtris
  • jaicourtney
  • love
  • romance
I'd shoot myself. It's like when we have church get together so and I have to put on a smile and laugh and shake hands and listen to "God bless you" or "May the Lord be with you" or "God be with you, child" you start to go insane.
simmi_trblnch simmi_trblnch Jun 28, 2016
Please just separate your comments from the story. Like maybe put it in bold or something. Great story so far! Poor Capricornia, must be frightened to death by that truck, I would be.
TiaraTianna TiaraTianna Jun 24, 2015
I just Started reading this story and this is a great book so far!!
TiaraTianna TiaraTianna Jun 24, 2015
Okay I'm a Nice Person And All But I can't Peace Be With You All Day I need some action or hit someone at least
Abby_kebabby Abby_kebabby Apr 27, 2015
Thank you, it's really great for me to have such positive reviews, wait for the next chapter, I hope it's better :)
notreallyscarlett notreallyscarlett Apr 23, 2015
I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're an awesome writer (: