My Girl. Only Mine

My Girl. Only Mine

78.3K Reads 2.6K Votes 23 Part Story
Alexxandrea Primm By AlexxandreaPrimm Updated Nov 11, 2015

Sarah is a lustful vampire who has a thing for the schools nerdy girl Emmy. When Sarah can no longer hold back her lust for Emmy she does the unthinkable, will this ruin her chances? Or will Emmy finally be hers?

Every time I read that name I think of a show my little sisters used to watch called 'dragon tales'.  One of the main character's names was Emmy XD
nachtmusik nachtmusik May 18
Everything is a tad bit too fast pace. The fast switching between characters make it hard to bond with them. This would be a good story if it's slower and more descriptive.
She_Nesian She_Nesian Nov 10
ONE WAY, OR ANOTHER! IM GONNA FIND YA! IM GONNA GET YA GET YA GET YA GET YA!
Parents love you. I'm a nerd. My dad (if you ask him, he does) doesn't love me. Sorry, I just had to prove that this isn't always true.
Luitenant_Spyro Luitenant_Spyro Dec 05, 2015
To be honest, I though this story would be better than it actually is 'cause the cover looked serious... But it's still pretty good.  :)
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
Lines were well written. What a fantastic story! There's not much if anything I would change. I loved it!