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The Looking Star (Ultimate spiderman fanfiction-Season 1)

The Looking Star (Ultimate spiderman fanfiction-Season 1)

17.9K Reads 707 Votes 14 Part Story
|•Jade•| By dreadeddream Completed

I am Emily Parker. Peter Parker's sister. 
You probably never heard of me and that's fine. 
Me and Peter go to the same grade. Where only that same age for a while.

daughterofposiden1 daughterofposiden1 Jun 15, 2016
I thought it was a great start, except two things, the spacing and the spelling need a little work.
Toxicfoxr Toxicfoxr Mar 03, 2016
Bad grammar. Makes no sense. Lots and lots of spelling errors. Pretty bad writing.