The Looking Star (Ultimate spiderman fanfiction-Season 1)

The Looking Star (Ultimate spiderman fanfiction-Season 1)

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|•Jade•| By dreadeddream Completed

I am Emily Parker. Peter Parker's sister. 
You probably never heard of me and that's fine. 
Me and Peter go to the same grade. Where only that same age for a while.

  • ava
  • danny
  • emily
  • luke
  • peter
  • sam
  • silver
  • superheros
  • supervillons
The-Hooded_Girl The-Hooded_Girl Jun 15, 2016
I thought it was a great start, except two things, the spacing and the spelling need a little work.
Toxicfoxr Toxicfoxr Mar 03, 2016
Bad grammar. Makes no sense. Lots and lots of spelling errors. Pretty bad writing.