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One + Two (manxgirlxman)

One + Two (manxgirlxman)

61.8K Reads 1.5K Votes 7 Part Story
lovelesss97 By lovelesss97 Updated Sep 26, 2015

Mia has two best friends, who all love and cherish each other, Sebastian and Crim. Mia and the boys enjoy there high school life together, until they graduate and go there own ways. During this process, Mia becomes more torn through broken relationships and abuse. While Sebastian and Crim live there lives with money, but they both feel that something is missing in there life....

Find out what happens in this exciting story of One + Two. 

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Loveangeljay Loveangeljay May 04, 2016
I would love more description. And be careful of homophones  their/there
Mi_Moon Mi_Moon Feb 25, 2016
You should add more sensory details what do you hear, smell, etc.
Loveangeljay Loveangeljay May 04, 2016
Read over everything before posting. I feel like you mean incident.
Loveangeljay Loveangeljay May 04, 2016
This is an abrupt change from the last chapter we are left unresolved. Where did her friends go? Did they ever talk again? If its 3 years later did that moment of not congratulating them really matter especially enough to be the the major idea of the first chapter?