Sword Art Online: Yuiki Story (Being edited)

Sword Art Online: Yuiki Story (Being edited)

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keybladewielder16 By keybladewielder16 Completed

Yuiki Moto is a twelve year old girl who loves virtual reality games and when she hears about Sword Art Online her parents buy her the game they all login to play, when they find out if there HP hits zero they die in the real world Yuiki gains the courage to fight on but her parents stay on the first floor so they can be safe and to make it even worst they abandoned Yuiki so she's meets Kirito in this game and they start to survive this game together
I don't own SAO all rights go to the rightful owners I only own the OCs

  • art
  • asuna
  • blade
  • kirito
  • online
  • skill
  • sword
  • yui
  • yuiki
The writing needs some work, but seeing as your editing it, that's probably being taken care of. I'm really enjoying the story so far. Keep up the good work!
Nepgear1175 Nepgear1175 Aug 07
Wait is Yuiki Moto based off of Yugi Moto? Y'know, considering that they both love games and stuff?
It's like the thundermans
                              Hank: Max, if you leave this house you are no longer our son
                              Max: Then I guess I'm not your son anymore
kaixal kaixal Jan 28, 2016
Shouldn't you be worrying about her safety and not the fact that she isn't your daughter anymore?
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              This is why I can't wait to be old enough to move out. NO RULES!
Anime_lover424 Anime_lover424 Nov 17, 2015
U used literally the same story line and names from the anime and the same things that happened in it
theminecraftking theminecraftking Oct 14, 2015
It's a little bit rushed but it's really good update real soon