Sword Art Online: Yuiki Story (Being edited)

Sword Art Online: Yuiki Story (Being edited)

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keybladewielder16 By keybladewielder16 Completed

Yuiki Moto is a twelve year old girl who loves virtual reality games and when she hears about Sword Art Online her parents buy her the game they all login to play, when they find out if there HP hits zero they die in the real world Yuiki gains the courage to fight on but her parents stay on the first floor so they can be safe and to make it even worst they abandoned Yuiki so she's meets Kirito in this game and they start to survive this game together
I don't own SAO all rights go to the rightful owners I only own the OCs

  • art
  • asuna
  • blade
  • kirito
  • online
  • skill
  • sword
  • yui
  • yuiki
AKA-renegade AKA-renegade Apr 22, 2017
The writing needs some work, but seeing as your editing it, that's probably being taken care of. I'm really enjoying the story so far. Keep up the good work!
Nepgear1175 Nepgear1175 Aug 07, 2017
Wait is Yuiki Moto based off of Yugi Moto? Y'know, considering that they both love games and stuff?
YukiYamada- YukiYamada- Mar 03
omg my parents would never say i wouldnt be their daughter if I literally go outta the place like omg her parents SUCK but I mean they were the ones that bought the game but STILL ....and Kirito is ok and is strong so yey i am kinda safe yyeeyeyeyey! ^^ sorry idek what i am saying myself
princess70987 princess70987 Jul 21, 2017
It's like the thundermans
                              Hank: Max, if you leave this house you are no longer our son
                              Max: Then I guess I'm not your son anymore
kaixal kaixal Jan 28, 2016
Shouldn't you be worrying about her safety and not the fact that she isn't your daughter anymore?
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              This is why I can't wait to be old enough to move out. NO RULES!
theminecraftking theminecraftking Oct 14, 2015
It's a little bit rushed but it's really good update real soon