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KAKUHIDA

KAKUHIDA

10.9K Reads 431 Votes 13 Part Story
Lemon Uchiha By blue_uchiha Completed

The man who gave everything to protect him.
Disclaimer: I do not own NARUTO, belongs to Masashi Kishimoto.

Definitely cute, but something I would work on is indentations after someone speaks, so pressing the enter bar after one character finishes talking and the other one starts, because it can get kind of confusing figuring out who's talking otherwise.
Some jumps from first person to third person, but that last line made it worth it.
EreriTowelBlanket EreriTowelBlanket Jul 24, 2016
This is great and cute! You don't see too many good Kakuhida fics on Wattpad, so this is nice!
Naruto_crazy Naruto_crazy Aug 01, 2015
Haha I loved that last part! Hehe good ol Hidan for ya. (⌒▽⌒)  please update as soon as you can again it's amazingggggg I must read moreeeee!!
Naruto_crazy Naruto_crazy Jul 18, 2015
I think it's amazing. I love it and can't wait for you to update again. ^-^