Surviving School

Surviving School

129K Reads 4K Votes 41 Part Story
Megan By Megnets Completed

After Maggie Jones’ School was involved in a shooting that shook the country, her parents decide to pack up everything and move into the state of Wisconsin in hopes of helping Maggie recover. There, Maggie will get the chance to start over.  Nobody knows the truth about her past and Maggie intends to keep it that way. That is until she meets the school’s so-called "player" but is he really as bad as the rumors say? That’s when Maggie realizes that keeping her secret will be harder then she thought.  Cover by LifeLustingDreamer

It makes me want to see another chapter.. Addicted to this story
iamapotato_ iamapotato_ Aug 12, 2013
@Megnets It's okay, haha. If there's anything else you need improvement on, come to meeeee!
teen-fighter teen-fighter Aug 12, 2013
8.5/10 (:
                              LIKES
                              -I love the storyline/plot idea (: 
                              -I love the characters.
                              -I love the intro (:
                              -The cover is beautiful <3
                              
                              NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
                              -The paragraphs are too long (in my opinion)
                              -Minor grammatical errors (:
                              
                              Good job <3
                              Lia
kikipower123 kikipower123 Mar 12, 2013
Great use of dialogue. I love your characters. Keep on writing!
YoungAndUndefined YoungAndUndefined Mar 11, 2013
I Really Like this chapter. I like how you potrayed the emotion through the character. It made my feel really sad for her :( I also love the relationship Maggie has with Nick. He seems like a great older brother! Voted :)
JustHaych JustHaych Mar 04, 2013
This a really good start =) and it wasn't boring =D I enjoyed it! =D Everyone need a starting point and this was a good one =D
                              keep up the good work =D