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Pandora Riddle - Voldemorts Daughter (Book 1)

Pandora Riddle - Voldemorts Daughter (Book 1)

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Chloe By xchloeeex Completed

Pandora Riddle is the daughter of Lord Voldemort and she hates Harry Potter as much as her father does. Thanks to her best friend Draco she is sent to Hogwarts on her last chance to not mess up like she has done at her previous school. Little does she know how eventful her first day of school will be and what it will lead up to...

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                              Make sure to put capital letters when needed.
                              Try to use punctuation, it makes the story a lot better and easier to read.
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                              Maybe a bit longer?
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heart_of_a_Slytherin heart_of_a_Slytherin Aug 27, 2016
Hey don't complain I have 2 spiders just smaller then pam of my hand that live on my window of my room. All night I here them scratching on the window.🕷
Thewolf525 Thewolf525 Sep 08, 2016
Ok When I Finish The Book I Will Comment On This Comment And Give Feedback! No stress btw!
PanicAttackDisco PanicAttackDisco May 31, 2016
Bovered.... Hmm I'm guessing the author must be British 😂
AleighaSatterfield8 AleighaSatterfield8 Nov 06, 2016
Bird thing is true I hate it especially when I'm trying to go back to sleep