❧ Soul Tear ❧(On Hold! Slow Updates - Heavy Revisions Chapter 16 + )

❧ Soul Tear ❧(On Hold! Slow Updates - Heavy Revisions Chapter 16 + )

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𝓇𝑜𝒷𝒾𝓃 𝓉. 𝓋𝒶𝓁𝑒 By darkocean Updated Mar 17

Merryn Dentree is a 70-year-old Elven priestess (20 in human years,) who gave up the quiet life to help her people. 

A god imprisoned within the ancient Book of Souls has weakened the rune seals that bound him to it. Plans to destroy him go askew, minutes after handling the book, the runes shatter. With no physical body to house him, he merged with Merryns.

Racing home she's desperate for help; all the while a wrathful guard hunts her, waiting to strike. 

Two hearts, two minds. Keeping her sanity soon becomes the biggest battle of all. 

Revisions are almost done! 30 chapters to go.

Update: 9/13/2017 - 29 chapters to go.

  • adventure
  • assassin
  • badass
  • darkfantasy
  • elf
  • fantasy
  • femaleprotagonist
  • friendship
  • horror
  • magic
  • orginal
  • projecttheundiscovered
  • thief
  • thriller
  • writteninaction
darkocean darkocean Oct 07
Thank you for your kind words. ☺ I worry about making the chapter too long and have been hesitant to add more. 
                              
                              Where do you desire more descriptions, could you clarify please?
 #MarshmellowBC
                              I love this. It is a really creative way of letting us know she doesn't belong.
piyobear88 piyobear88 Oct 03
I think 'Come on, move your slow-moving frilly butts' should be italicised. It's her thought, right? =)
darkocean darkocean Sep 24
Think of it as spitting that is spraying out and covering yoyr cheek and maybe eye lid too. Blea!
darkocean darkocean Sep 24
Or like the sample sentence a drop of spit that dangles out of a pit bulls mouth.
TheLifeOfJo TheLifeOfJo Sep 23
This sentence is a little awkward. Maybe adjust the punctuation like this:
                              
                              "She clutched it, giving a squeeze. It stretched out and slimmed back down, compressing its contents."
                               #BBC