Okay so I'm thinking that this book is written by a black person because of the way he/she talks
I like it. I don't mind the slang at all(noticed other people mentioned it). slang while they are talking in dialog I liked :) and I liked the cute way they bumped into one another and the way you ended it with "I am dying to find out" cute
Good book. think I will continue, but the run on sentences are killing me.
Not being rude or non but can I you speak in correct English. It would make your story a lot better .but other than that it's pretty good
No build up, not detailed enough and seems rushed. Books are detailed to a fault, they tell you what movies can't. Nothing seems amazing enough about the mystery girl for her to be on your mind all day.
Her Cousin Kaylyn Had The Same Name As Me Lol , Buh Mine Is Spelled Kaylynn (: