Elementalists (completed)

Elementalists (completed)

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R@$c@1 By rascal122 Completed

Blitz Ann Boardel has finally reached the coming age. The day she gets something she's been waiting for, something she's longed for her whole life.

Her element.

But.....what element will she get? 

Wind, Water, Fire, Earth, Ice, Lightning, Metal, or Earth?

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A\N Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

I only got a friend in Year 1.. Then I moved. I miss her.. :)
As a Japanese person myself, the first thing that came to mind was pearl. I doubt it means that, but - you know what this isn't going anywhere - if you're sat here reading my comment you'll never finish the story
The way you've listed these makes it seem kind of like there are 14 cities rather than 7. I'd suggest listing them like this: "the water city, Mizu City; the wind city, Kuki city; the ice city, Asiu City" etc.
I thought that was a joke, now I feel like a terrible person 😢😰😭
Icystormrises14 Icystormrises14 Jun 09, 2015
Dirt won't make the greatest impression on electric people you know.