Can't It Be Everyone's Fault?

Can't It Be Everyone's Fault?

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LetUsReadNow By LetUsReadNow Updated May 17, 2016

James Sirius Potter, the eldest son of Harry Potter and the grandson of James Potter. He's a descendent of a Marauder. He has trouble in his blood. So, what happens when James finds a time turner locked in his father's drawer? What destruction will follow if he accidentally sends him and his family to his parent's time? Who knows? Anything can happen to a Potter...
(A Time Turner Fanfiction)

What's this? An interesting story with proper grammar and punctuation that actually capitalizes names and quotes correctly?  And it gives background information that hooks the reader in? 
                              
                              Me: ALL HAIL THIS WRITER!!!! *falls on knees and starts bowing*
- - Mar 09
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