series of short stories I wrote. if you want one to become a book message me and I'll see what I can do ;)
Can you also check out my book and follow me😊its different language but you can look at my photos,media
Good story. Constructive cristism: try breaking up your story into paragraphs (such as starting a new line when each person takes turns talking.) This will make it easier to read and that's just the way you are supposed to format stories. Other than that, it is really good so far.