Melloyern: 13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing
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  • Parts 38
  • Time 4h 0m
Complete, First published Jul 25, 2024
"You sure you want to be a magician?" ask an old woman to a boy.
   "yes Granny Ren. I will be the greatest magician of all Melloyern." He said enthusiastically as the Granny softly caress his small and smooth hand.

   The boy then ran to his friends as one of them calling him to play football. The Granny look at the boy silently with a solemn smile. Her eye narrow in a soft and gentle gaze she give to the kids that was playing at her yard.

   "He will be." she said before stand and walk to a well.

   The boy were born as a normal human. There is no easy way for him to be a magician. he has no mana in him. Or that's what everyone expect from him.

    Writer: "Hey, that's enough reminiscing about your past. it's the story description section. Not the story yet!"
    Nakajima: "Fine. I will start with the description."

   Writer: " good. get back to work."

   13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing, as the name suggest, It was about a holy crystal that blessed a land. like a mainland or somesort. So...

   Writer: "is that really the right way to make a description?"

   Nakajima: *sigh*

   There is a mainland with 13 state under a flag named Melloyern. These all 13 state have it's very own holy crystal that bless the state individually. But, the crystal contains powerful amount of mana that makes every single person in Melloyern going for it.

   A group of magician called Denials were up to collect all of the crystal to keep them safe from wrong hands. There is a lot of hindrance in their path such as the Kingdom of Melloyern itself is turning against these guys. Still there are more.

   Can they survive? it's up to them to decide. Can they achieve what they aim for? It's always up to them to decide their own future.

   Nakajima: "Satisfied?"

   Writer: *Claps his hands many time* "Very much."

   Nakajima: " Can I keep daydreaming?"

   Writer: " what did you say? You also in the story so... get in there!"

   Nakajima: *sigh and step into the story*
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The Special Outcast #Wattys2015

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Melinda goes to a school in a far far away place, to a school of magic but everyone else there is as normal as normal. They learn what school kids do. The usual algebra and chemistry but they are trained with powers. The school do not teach them how to control their powers, they teach themselves. Like every school, there is always the popular and the unpopular. In her school, there is two really sexy prefect, 2 pop stars, 2 princesses, famous actors, cool cheerleaders, geeks, and of course, herself. Everyone in her class was special in a way, even the geeks. There was no average kids, only her. To make things worse, the smart students have been chosen. They were chosen to train and protect their world, Xigix. Xigix calls them CPs which stands for Coolest People since they all think they are so cool. She does not have any hate towards them but the chosen people from her class out of the 6 chosen CPs were the 2 popstars and the 2 princesses, not her. Melinda was upset, the only cool thing was that she dated one of the popstars but they decided to be friends after all. She did not mind that but she does realise that she is the big outcast of the class but on her 18 birthday, she realises something really special. She happens to be the Nyphm of the Ocean. She really is one of the 6 Nypmhs of Xigix together with her not-so-cool classmates, Laurel and Jessilyn, Nymph of Elements and Nymph of the Soul. The other nymphs turn out quite stunning too. Together they are a team but will Melinda's classmate ever see who she really is and will she get accepted as someone special to them? Will she still be considered an outcast to her class? Above Star class? --- Inspiration from Winx Club! The princesses and popstars part were made by @ShinyYeo , for more information on the popstars...check my other story "Braving The Past" but has nothing to do with this one. The cover is made by @qu33en_of_m3 This story is my idea and I appreciate if you do not re-post it! Thanks:)